Fernpaw of SycamoreClan

[Warriorkitten]

Name: Fernpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: She-cat
Position: Apprentice
Clan: SycamoreClan
Picture: www.wegies.com/two_suns_in_the_sunset/two_suns_in_the_sunset9.jpg
Quick Description: A tortie-tabby she-cat
Appearance:

Fernpaw is a tortioushell tabby she-cat with amber eyes. She is of normal height, with a slightly longer tail. Her tortie-tabby fur is short in length. But her legs are longer. Fernpaw has white front paws and a white tail-tip. She has one scar from where she got attacked by a fox, but its not really a scar, more of a nick in her ear.

Personality:

Fernpaw is very bouncy and active. She enjoys hunting with other apprentices, and going on evening patrols. Sometimes she helps bring her sister some herbs, but not very often. Fernpaw is much to active for that! Fernpaw hates waiting for anything, which she is not so good at hunting sometimes. She is very nice to everyone.

History:

Fernpaw was born in a litter of 3, with her sister Indigopaw, and her brother, Dingopaw. She enjoyed playing with her siblings, and was a healthy, lively kit. Indigopaw was not however. Her sister soon fell ill. Fernpaw was very worried for her sisters life, but thank Starclan Indigopaw lived. When they became apprentices, Fernpaw was dissapointed that she would not be training with her sister, but she soon got over it. Fernpaw gets into trouble often, but the thing is, she dosn't mind the punishments. After all, what's not to like about listining to stories in the elders den? When Fernpaw and Dingopaw were new apprentices, they decided to go out to hunt. Little did they know, they came crashing into a young foxes den! They managed to get out of there alive, surprisingly, with only a couple scratches. That is where Fernpaw got her nick from her ear!

IC:

Password: Bluestar
Other:

Wow! It's done! And I have more than ten sentances in the history! Double wow!

Password: Bluestar
Other:

Wow! It's done! And I have more than ten sentances in the history! Double wow!

[fawnkit]

=) I think it is good so far.

[Spottedpaw2007]

Make the apperence longer and more literate. Plus try and make the quick dispcripetion a bit more literate too.

[Jess]

Cool, accepted. Except that Dingopaw isn't going to be their brother anymore. I'm going to make him in NightClan, and someone else be their brother/sister. So, its accepted, but edit it whenever I make him/her if you want to.

[Warriorkitten]

oh ok.